MAN can Yesung sing... anyway.
Yesterday. Two essays. Y'know, I was actually half-way worried I wouldn't finish. Haha, well everyone saw how that turned out. I was so bored... so yeah, the essays. I think I got stupid with my language choice. I didn't say anything openly stupid (like 'cheese bunnies can fly!' or something), but I definitely was being silly with the imagery and speech. BAM BAM BAM beat that argument into submission! RAHHHRRR YOU WON THE GRAND PRIZE.
Ahem.
So yeah, I learned.. um... I'm way too fast, and the papers were printed with this awesome ink that was all bumpy and fun to touch. Thanks Evan/Enrrique for being weird enough to notice that! : D
It's great that you have the ability to fly through your writing, but I think you don't take advantage of the time left over. You could use the time to expound and beef up your paragraphs. Although yoiu are a fine writer, your paragraphs are often less than substantial. Do you hear me? Beef up your paragraphs! Expound! Explain! Even though you don't think so, your essays could be better. Go for better.
ReplyDelete"BAM BAM BAM beat that argument into submission! RAHHHRRR YOU WON THE GRAND PRIZE." Yays!
ReplyDeleteAnd you're welcome~